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I'm helpless, hopeless; but noone knows this,
   I'm fighting just to stay alive.
I just can't get over the love of another,
   Can someone please tell me,  Was it all a lie?


Take this love, and bury it deep,
  Hide it away so noone can see.
Letting it show, brings nothing but grief,
   We were a promise that you just couldn't keep.
Take these chains, off of my heart,
   Shackles of pain, but they won't come apart.
Abandoned by love, divided by fear,
   but i have to admit that i still want you here....
©2007-2009 ~Lonely-In-Love
:iconlonely-in-love:

Author's Comments

submitted unfinished as my first attempt at song. i would appreciate any comments or feedback, i've but it to music already, but can't seem to take it any further...

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:iconnix0xin:
Good job.

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Fix up, look sharp.
Hereeeeeeeeeeee's Johnny!
:iconmarionettecassee:
It's really good hun. Sometimes you just have to take a step back for a bit, and then you can write again. :hug:

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Marionnette Cassée

</3 And some day when I start to matter please just let me know..
:iconmallic-42:
Sounds like a spur of the moment thing. I like it, feels kinda lightheartedly-depressive, if you get what I mean... which I'm sure you don't :blush:
:iconlonely-in-love:
all true, it was written while at work on my forklift lol, and i was depressed but distracted, so lightheartedly-depressed works just fine :) thanks for the fav's

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Running from the past doesn't do any good, no matter how fast you are, yesterday is always right behind you.

!Self-Injury-Club

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